feed back from pitch

link to our pitch feedback

from the feed back that we got back form this we have decided to take some of the feed back into consideration and have now changed the plot slightly instead of the opening to the film being Adam and Stanley fighting for two minutes we are now having it as Stanley coming back to his home town after 5 years. as the plot outline is explained above. we thought by having this idea instead it will appear to be more of an opening to a film, as if i was to watch a 2 minute opening of a film with two men fighting i would be confused with why they are fighting and would appear to be more of a short film. the feedback really helped us to gather more ideas as a group and create a better pitch to a two minute opening to a film. 

Done by Holly 

group roles

Roles 

•Producer - Ollie Woodward

•Manages the team. Completes: budget, action planning, time management, risk assessment and progress updates.

•Director- Ollie Woodward

•Is in charge of the shoot. Completes: call sheet and works closely with the Storyboard Artist on the storyboard, shot list and shot schedule.

•Editor- Holly Paterson

•Edits the film on the editing software.

•Sound Editor- Holly Paterson

•Responsible for finding sound effects (including foley sound) and re-recording any unclear dialogue or sounds.

•Cinematographer- Holly Paterson

•Responsible for filming. Works closely with the director and storyboard artist during planning.

•Composer- Holly Paterson

•Responsible for finding copyright-free music or composing/ recording original music.

•Make-up Artist- Holly Paterson

•Responsible for make-up. Works closely with the Set, Costume and Pro

•Writer- Malcolm Pocock

•Writes the idea for the film. Completes: pitch and script.

•Storyboard Artist- Holly Paterson

•Completes: animatic or photo-storyboard or drawn storyboard; shot list and shot schedule.

•Location Scout- Malcolm Pocock

•Responsible for finding suitable locations for the film. Locations are photographed and a presentation is prepared to show the rest of the group.

•Technical Director- Malcolm Pocock

•Completes: equipment list and organises all technical equipment required for the shoot.

•Set, Costume and Prop Design- All of the group

Responsible for mise-en-scene, including props and costumes. Completes a list of the same.

preliminary task- film

link to video

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aNUXLjV2AUU

Edited and done by Holly

preliminary task- storyboard

This shot shows Alice reading her book at the very opening of the clip, the shot type is a slight crane as it is high above the character and you can see her full body but it isn't as high as a normal crane also we do not have the equipment for that. There will be some editing when she is reading and the lighting will be darker as if its in a bedroom. The timing for this shot is 2 seconds as its at the beginning of the clip.

This frame shows Alice and Harry having a disagreement as they do not have a lot of money at the moment and has come home telling alice about him losing his job today. This is a two person shot but during this clip there will be some editing to do shot reverse shot, so we may film each character saying there lines then edit them together. The timing for this will be about 45 secs 

This is where the agreement gets a more serious and violence is used when alice gets really angry with harry. This is also a two person shot but we will also use a behind the shoulder shot so you can see each of the characters emotes while arguing with the person they love.  The timing for this will be another 30 seconds.

This is when alice goes back in time to the 40's and is walking through town and bumps into a boy called Kane, alice thinks se is still married to Harry but they haven't even met yet. this is a two person mid shot of the two strangers talking. The timing for this will be 

This is where Alice gets very confused about her surroundings and then asks for todays date and Kane shows Alice his newspaper. Alice is in shock and is very upset about the argument that she had with her boyfriend Harry. this is a two person shot but also shows you the characters emotion/expressions. The timing for this will be

this is where Alice goes to have a walk and consider and think about what she has just found out. here we have gone back in time to the 1940s and she is trying to find her boyfriend harry to sort things out.here we have a long shot which allows a person to see the whole of Alice's body as well as her body language.