from the feed back that we got back form this we have decided to take some of the feed back into consideration and have now changed the plot slightly instead of the opening to the film being Adam and Stanley fighting for two minutes we are now having it as Stanley coming back to his home town after 5 years. as the plot outline is explained above. we thought by having this idea instead it will appear to be more of an opening to a film, as if i was to watch a 2 minute opening of a film with two men fighting i would be confused with why they are fighting and would appear to be more of a short film. the feedback really helped us to gather more ideas as a group and create a better pitch to a two minute opening to a film.
Done by Holly
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